I sit here in this dark room,
Alone, without a soul to touch,
My mind rests on nothing,
Floating on an ethereal crutch.
This has happened before,
But not exactly this way,
I have felt alone always,
But no, not this day.
This dusk holds the key,
Leading me, like a dark knight,
It gives me a simple message,
Everything is like day and night.
One follows the other,
And we are always in between,
Sometimes living in reality,
Sometimes in a dream.
Who knows where I am right now,
Contemplating which extreme,
But the journey always is fun,
For it never is what it may seem.
An emotion here, a thought there,
Right now you think you’re sad,
But tomorrow you will calm down,
And wonder if you were mad.
So will the sea always keep swirling,
And the tides will always come and go,
Mercifully ravaging my narrow views,
When I imprison myself, refusing to flow.
Sometimes, like on this dusk,
I rise above the sea and see,
How really small our concerns are,
How magnificent we all can be.
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“One follows the other,
And we are always in between,
Sometimes living in reality,
Sometimes in a dream.”
That’s downright spooky. The theme of the story I’m writing now could be summed up by that stanza.
Are you really this moody, or is it just a mood you are trying to evoke in others? It feels so claustrophic. How about writing something bouncy and silly?
Having said that, you poem obviously touched me and got through to me, or I wouldn’t be asking you for something else:)
Good writing, but I can feel bad without your help. Give me something HAPPY!
Comment by KnotKeats July 23, 2007 @ 5:07 amThanks for the comment, as always.
Lol. No I am not trying to mean living in a dream as in after taking marijuana or some surreal stuff. I was rather trying to say that we shouldn’t be stuck up in ourselves, which is like a dream and see how magnificent the world is, and how magnificent we are, which is reality. And worrying about yourself and feeling happy about yourself, will always oscillate like day and night, and one should transcend it with time and start accepting life as it is and find peace. Thats all. I guess that got lost somewhere =). And yeah I am moody, everyone is, but not THAT moody. lol.
But as for your last comment, true. All my poems of late have become all heavy and philosophical, its time to right something light. Thanks for the suggestion, your wish will be done! =)
Comment by lostrealist July 23, 2007 @ 5:21 amyou have not written anything for sooooooooo long . busy qya ? write something naa , if not a poem – even a prose would do.
Comment by Sifar September 16, 2007 @ 10:40 am